SPR
In the Face of Love:
The Book of the Beloved
Updates Log
9 April 2007
Revisions
The Odyssey of the Peerless Idiot and
The Brick Stops Here: The Complete Works of Sugarpie Rabbit, Summer 2006 - 12 February 2007
•
Preface and Dedication
[prose]
First-edit: Culled/Elimated many extraneous words. Reworded segments. Also revised its voice-perspective, in terms of now-known end-date for its epoch.
•
Table of Contents 
Re-arranged some sequencing/placements, to wit:
praise, when, All of this.
Gorillas in the Midst: The Complete Works of Sugarpie Rabbit, from 13 February 2007
•
The Windows of Hell
[prose]
Beginning with this piece, decided to begin adding TCB links to the bottom of all titles (not just the ones previously published there).
• [same one]
Re-established as "Recently uploaded" for a while longer.
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*(originally published at
The Camel's Back (TCB) weblog,
link provided)
3 April 2007
Additions
The Odyssey of the Peerless Idiot and
The Brick Stops Here: The Complete Works of Sugarpie Rabbit, Summer 2006 - 12 February 2007
•
Untethered
(major edit) *
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While We Lay Dreaming
[prose exerpt] *
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The What (you want to know), Part 1
[prose] *
Orts
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Legend: Real Names
(fka, TCB:
While We Lay Dreaming
[prose exerpt]) *
Revisions
The Odyssey of the Peerless Idiot
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Epistle
Pre-existing at SPR: Added to this collection.
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*(originally published at
The Camel's Back (TCB) weblog,
link provided)
29 March 2007
Revisions
SPR Updates Log
• [Last previous date of entry, below]
Corrected typo: Former display was "27 March", now "26 March".
The Odyssey of the Peerless Idiot and
The Brick Stops Here: The Complete Works of Sugarpie Rabbit, Summer 2006 - 12 February 2007
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The Beloved*
Did it again (sigh). [WHY does this particular piece refuse to be left alone? This has never happened with anything I've written before. Ever.]
Today's changes almost entirely punctuation and nitpicking re layout, although I did move one entire line from the middle of a section into its own separate paragraph, and re-positioned a second line.
[Really miss that "death" last-line, deleted earlier (see below), but increasingly remain convinced is artistically superior without. My fascination with previous ending probably has more to-do with my own psychology (re personal adventure) than with the piece as "poem". Continue to struggle within myself on this: For now, leaving ending as-is.]
Additions
Orts
•
Subtitle?*
Annotated
News
and
Did you know?
segments.
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Introduction to The Talking Monkey
(fka,
Was she the talking dog trapped in the modifier?)*
Retitled topically.
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*(originally published at
The Camel's Back (TCB) weblog,
link provided)
26 March 2007
Revisions
The Odyssey of the Peerless Idiot and
The Brick Stops Here: The Complete Works of Sugarpie Rabbit, Summer 2006 - 12 February 2007
•
The Beloved*
Added a couple or three lines; Rearranged the sequence of a few lines; Replaced a word here, two there. Deleted the last two lines. Also re-conceived the graphic layout. (Hopefully, this is the final modification? Anything else could only ruin it.)
____________
*(originally published at
The Camel's Back (TCB) weblog,
link provided)
25 March 2007
Revisions
The Odyssey of the Peerless Idiot and
The Brick Stops Here: The Complete Works of Sugarpie Rabbit, Summer 2006 - 12 February 2007
•
The Beloved*
Deleted one word from line 29, added three words to line 36.
Additions
The Odyssey of the Peerless Idiot and
The Brick Stops Here: The Complete Works of Sugarpie Rabbit, Summer 2006 - 12 February 2007
•
Anybody know how many more yards make up a bolt?*
Given a thorough edit as a stand-alone piece of prose, although essence untouched from TCB original/draft. (Retains suggestion of letter-to-Bertha structure.)
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*(originally published at
The Camel's Back (TCB) weblog,
link provided)
23 March 2007
Revisions
SPR | In the Face of Love: The Book of the Beloved
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Orts
Getting too full for links-format. Added drop-down menu of all Orts by date, re-labeling page's existing links "sample orts".
Additions
The Odyssey of the Peerless Idiot and
The Brick Stops Here: The Complete Works of Sugarpie Rabbit, Summer 2006 - 12 February 2007
•
The Beloved*
Poem extracted from the middle of a TCB blog entry,
After the Fall
(see below).
Orts
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After the Fall*
(30 June 2006)
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*(originally published at
The Camel's Back (TCB) weblog,
link provided)
21 March 2007
Revisions
In the Face of Love: The Book of the Beloved
• Top panel, all pages:
Updates
Icon now goes directly to
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instead of to the
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subscription form [where that page is linked].
•
SPR Updates Log
Now includes a new link to the
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subscription form, for those who after reading the page prefer the information by monthly email.
In A Rib: The Complete Works of Sugarpie Rabbit, Autumn 1994 - Spring 2006
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Easter's child — the soundtrack
Reformatted for greater [poetic] interpretive clarity, including use of uppercase as syntax.
Orts
•
Two pieces*
Added, with a lengthy [new] addenda.
19 March 2007
Revisions
The Brick Stops Here: The Complete Works of Sugarpie Rabbit, Summer 2006 - 12 February 2007
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Even more graffiti*
Added one (1), 15 June 2006*.
•
Goat Wisdom*
(In collection
Walls
)
Added one (1), 17 March 2007.
black hole: The Complete Works of Sugarpie Rabbit, 1971 - Summer 1994
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More graffiti
Added one (1), 29 June 1993
SPR Writings
[Poetry
icon]
• Link
Last uploaded [File named
latest.html]
Renamed:
Recently uploaded,
and file renamed
recent.html
• Link
Chronological Titles at SPR
Renamed:
SPR Timeline & First Copyrights,
[File retains name
chronological.html]
Additions
end of a spring: The Complete Works of Sugarpie Rabbit, 1966 - 1970
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lester wilson
•
My love for you
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Satan
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moon
•
The month of Fall's death
black hole: The Complete Works of Sugarpie Rabbit, 1971 - Summer 1994
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myth*
Very slight revision from original/TCB version.
In A Rib: The Complete Works of Sugarpie Rabbit, Autumn 1994 - Spring 2006
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Listening
•
easter's child — the soundtrack*
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*(originally published at
The Camel's Back (TCB) weblog,
link provided)
13 March 2007
Epochs/Collected Works series
Gorillas in the Midst: from 13 February 2007
First writing of new epoch required this webpage be created and uploaded. (See below.)
Revisions
SPR Writings
[
Poetry
icon]
•
Orts
(New Reference tool)
Added collection-like links page: Provides home for orphaned pieces/rejects author retains ONLY for journalling purposes [personal reference]. These writings are excluded from all other menus, including their own epochs. (Rejects absent this anomalous function are not retained.)
Deletions
The Brick Stops Here: The Complete Works of Sugarpie Rabbit, Summer 2006 - 12 February 2007
:
Two rejects moved to
Orts
(see also above):
•
Anybody else would've said no
•
Whatta day
The Odyssey of the Peerless Idiot:
Same two titles.
Additions
Orts (as defined above)
•
won't be far to go*
(plus addenda
/Meditation, hindsight journalling re date of 27 June 2006, and thereabouts in time. Newbie-wonder: Too precious a commodity for wholesale abandonment to spurious elder-vagary.)
•
THOMAS, APOSTLE*
[29 August 2006 original title at TCB,
The Divine Terrier (part 2, continued)]
black hole: The Complete works of Sugarpie Rabbit, 1971 - Summer 1994
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Epistle*
In A Rib: TThe Complete Works of Sugarpie Rabbit, Autumn 1994 - Spring 2006
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cincinnati* (TCB fka
heat,
subsequently retitled)
Gorillas in the Midst: from 13 February 2007
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Author's Preface to...
•
The Windows of Hell
____________
*(originally published at
The Camel's Back (TCB) weblog,
link provided)
6 March 2007
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